Song Lyrics _ Writing Assignment #24
“Concealed behind black leather jackets
I hunker down against the brisk mountain air
We spiral downward…”

“Concealed behind black leather jackets
I hunker down against the brisk mountain air
We spiral downward…”
The deletion of words brings new meaning to the advertisement. After I deleted the words, I began re-writing the poem. As I wrote the poem, I again, deleted some words to push the meaning even further away from the meaning in the advertisement.
Continue reading →I imagine it was such a lovely summer meadow
Clover, Sweet Peas, Dandelion,
Crown Vetch, Queen Anne’s Lace
a large snail in a smooth spiral shell
beneath the silent pine tree