The deletion of words brings new meaning to the advertisement. After I deleted the words, I began re-writing the poem. As I wrote the poem, I again, deleted some words to push the meaning even further away from the meaning in the advertisement.
Walking by Inner Vision Journal Writing Assignment #22 The Photograph as Subject for your writing 1._ Select a photograph that seems to have special meaning for you. 2._ Sit quietly and look at the photo selected. 3._What colors do you see? What do the colors make you think of as you look at the photo?…
I imagine it was such a lovely summer meadow
Clover, Sweet Peas, Dandelion,
Crown Vetch, Queen Anne’s Lace
a large snail in a smooth spiral shell
beneath the silent pine tree